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In which the randomness of life, writing, and books exists.
Welcome
Hello, and welcome to my blog! I will be posting some of my writing, along with a few snippets of my life. Feel free to read and comment on anything. Thanks for coming!
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Favorite Books
- The Host
- Watership Down
- Wendnesday Wars
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3 comments:
Sob! Fine. I have an intense dislike of the name Rory as your boyfriend's name. I dunno, I'm used to that name being used for little brothers and such.
I'm commenting so calm down. I don't like the end of the chapter. It sounds really cliched and overused. So I suggest you find a different way to end it. And I think you should spend more time before the evil guys show up. I don't know what comes next but it seems you are kind of rushing into things.
Yeah, I also think that the idea of your head in a guy's lap is kind of scarring. No offense. I mean, it's kind of the first thing you read. . . .Anyway, for some reason I liked the other two versions of this chapter a bit better as well for some reason, sooo I dunno. International IDK Day!!!
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