Tuesday, August 5, 2008
Intro 1
Superheros. See? I was right. I bet you automatically thought about brave, famous people, either running around saving children from fires or flying through the air in neon colored spandex. See, 'heroes' is a word that makes you normal people think of those types of things. Bravery, victory, triumph, good; all come to mind when you think of hero. Not me. I wouldn't come to mind- I'm just that twenty year old girl you passed on your way in. I was the girl with the pale skin and long black hair, leaning on the wall of the bookstore. I was probably wearing a t-shirt and jeans, but if you were lucky, you saw me on shorts day. But you didn't really see me, now did you? You don't really believe I'm out there, waiting for someone to actually go looking for me. But that's okay. Because nobody has wanted to find me my entire life. Who am I? I'm a hero. I saved the United States from losing its normal human population. I saved the country from falling to an army of mutants. Are you curious yet, human? Will you dare to read my story? I must warn you, this is a story about TRUE heroes. Everything doesn't work out for the main character. Sometimes innocent people die, evil triumphs, and hearts break. But that's the life of a hero.
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3 comments:
This is very good, and it's nice to hear a new kind of voice. However,if you don't mind me saying, you need to do a little work on your editing.'Loosing' should be 'losing' and 'braking' ought to be 'breaking.' (Sorry, it's one of the first things I notice in writing.) Anyway, I'll keep reading/waiting for your new posts!
Thank you! I always appreciate comments, especially ones on grammar (I'm especially bad with spelling) Anyway, I'll be writing three different introductions, then choosing one, so feel free to read and comment!
Ahhh, I see. (I was wondering why each post started with a question . . .) Anyway, if you didn't want to delete them, you could just make it like diary entries in a book. (That's how I explained the whole question-at-every-beginning predicament for myself).However, I like the first two introductions best. The third one's nice, but not as good as the other two.
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